Have you been grinding away for months, publishing hundreds of blog posts, but your website traffic still feels dead in the water?
About 76% of business blogs publish over 100 posts a year, yet more than half of them see little to no improvement in traffic (Source: HubSpot Blog data)
The root problem often lies in low-quality content—it fails to truly meet searchers’ needs or offers only surface-level info.

Table of Contens
ToggleLack of depth, too shallow on the details
Take this example: You write a post on “How to learn English,” but all it says is “memorize vocabulary” and “watch more TV shows.” Super generic. Users walk away thinking, “Well, I already knew that.”
Here’s the data: According to Semrush’s analysis of low-performing content, around 62% of these posts struggled due to lack of depth.
Many articles seem long—maybe 1,000 words—but only have one or two real takeaways.
We’ve seen many websites publish dozens of articles targeting the same keyword (like “beginner yoga”), but they’re all basically copies of each other.
Each one just touches on basic terms and poses without diving into “why this pose works,” “common mistakes to avoid,” or “a realistic week-one plan for beginners”—the kind of stuff readers really want.
Why does shallow content fail to get traffic?
If your article just repeats the same basic info found everywhere else (“working out is good for your health,” “optimize your site speed”),
but doesn’t explain “exactly how to do it,” “why it works,” or “what worked best from our own experience,”—
then users will finish reading, say “meh, I already knew that,” and never come back.
The data backs this up:
- Search trends are changing: Google Trends shows searches like “How to…” (practical, step-by-step help) are growing 15%+ yearly, while searches for “What is…” (just definitions) have plateaued. People want solutions, not basics.
- Poor performance: Analytics tools like Semrush and Ahrefs show that articles with bounce rates over 75% and time-on-page under 1 minute are usually lacking “new value” beyond what the user already knows.
- Wasted effort: A real example: A tech review site published 30+ articles on “best phones to buy in 2024.” They all rehashed the same specs and brand comparisons. Six months in, those 30 posts brought in less traffic combined than a single, in-depth review by a competitor that covered “real battery performance by price range (with actual test results and charts).” The shallow, repetitive content was just a waste of time and resources.
How can you tell if your content is “too shallow”?
It only says “what,” but not “how” or “why”:
- Example 1: Saying “site speed is important.” (Shallow!) → Better: “We tested Brotli compression on our server and saw a 15–20% reduction in page size. Here’s how to set it up with Cloudflare…”
- Example 2: Saying “content should have depth.” (Also shallow—it’s just stating the obvious!) → Better: “3 actionable ways to add depth: 1) Use AnswerThePublic to find specific user questions; 2) Add supporting stats or case studies (tool: Statista); 3) Include comparison tables (e.g., A vs B performance across different use cases).”
Info dump with no focus: Your article reads like a list of random tips—maybe copied from various sources—but lacks a clear narrative or logical flow like “Problem → Solution → Proof”. Readers come away confused, unsure what the main takeaway was.
Missing original insights or real-life experience: If your post is just a summary of stuff anyone could Google, and doesn’t include your own hands-on experience, test results, lessons learned, or fresh takes, then it’s just another me-too article. Why would Google rank you over someone else?
Too afraid to take a stand: If your content tries to be “balanced” but ends up being vague and non-committal—listing every possibility but never saying what works best or who it’s for—then it fails. People want clear, actionable advice, not wishy-washy fluff.
How to “level up” your content
Actively dig for “information gaps”:
- Tools: Google Keyword Planner (free) / SEMrush “Keyword Gap.”
- How to do it: Google your target keyword and read the top 10 results. Pay close attention to comment sections or related forums like Reddit. What are users still confused about? What questions are left unanswered? These are your “depth opportunities.”
- Real example: A blogger wrote about “buying a coffee machine.” Most top results just listed brands and basic specs. But on Reddit, users were asking “How can I get coffee shop quality from a home machine?” So she wrote a post around that exact pain point: “Tested: This model + water hardness control + precise grind setting = 90% coffee shop flavor.” She included testing data and setup tips—and the post shot to #1. That’s the power of closing the information gap.
Structured Deep Dive with “5W2H”: When tackling a topic, push yourself to answer all 7 of these questions:
- What? (What is it? Define it clearly, but don’t stop there!)
- Why? (Why does it matter? Back it up with research or user pain point data)
- Who? (Who’s it for? Break down by scenario: beginner/pro, white-collar/student)
- When? (When’s the best time to do it? Timing/frequency)
- Where? (Where do you do it? Platforms/environments it applies to)
- How? (How to do it? Step-by-step guide, clear screenshots/videos)
- How much/many? (Cost/time/quantified results)
- You don’t need to fill in every single point, but make sure How? and Why? (with data) go deep.
Add Evidence and Comparisons:
Add Data: Even if it’s just a small test. If you say a method is faster, write something like “Tested: using YY tool saved 45 minutes compared to doing it manually”. Can’t test it yourself? Cite trusted sources like Statista, Pew Research, or official whitepapers — include the source and date.
Make Comparisons: “Method A vs Method B” is a built-in depth booster. Don’t just list pros and cons — show real-world performance differences (e.g. “On blogs with <1000 visitors, method a installs faster; on e-commerce sites with>10,000 visitors, Method B is more stable — check out the 3-month server log comparison chart”). These kinds of nuanced insights are what users really value.
Create an Action List or Checklist:
At the end of your article (or even mid-way), add a checklist your readers can download or follow directly. For example: “Checklist for Improving Content Depth: 1) Does it clearly answer a SERP question that no one else is solving? 2) Does it include at least one specific action step? 3) Does it contain one original data point or insight?…” This isn’t just a summary — it gives users something they can act on, boosting the page’s value and time-on-site (which Google cares a lot about).
Not Matching Search Intent
Search Intent is just what users *actually* want when they type something into Google — often they don’t say it directly.
Google itself says: Even for the same keyword (like “iPhone 15”), the intent can vary wildly — someone might just want photos (informational), specs (research), price comparisons (commercial), or help fixing an issue (problem-solving). If you try to answer all these intents with one “iPhone 15 Full Review” article, you’re gonna fall short.
So how many types of search intent are there?
Want to know what it is? (Informational)
- Typical searches: “What is the metaverse?”, “2024 Nobel Prize winners”, “What are the symptoms of a cold?” Users just want quick facts or a simple explanation.
- Content needs: Clear definitions, easy-to-understand explanations, visuals/videos to help. Don’t ramble or try to sell something!
- Data support: HubSpot’s analysis says around 40% of searches are purely informational.
Trying to solve a problem? (Navigational / Transactional – ready to buy)
- Typical searches: “Apple official site”, “XX bank login”, “Which Nike shoes are the lightest?”, “5-star hotels in Sanya with private pool.” These users are goal-driven — they’re looking for a specific site or seriously comparing products.
- Content needs: Direct links to the official pages, in-depth comparisons (features, price, pros/cons, real reviews), buying guides/discounts. Don’t make them dig or redirect to irrelevant stuff.
- Data support: Think with Google says users with buying intent view over 10 pieces of content before making a decision.
Want to learn how to do something? (Transactional – how-to / problem-solving)
- Typical searches: This is the goldmine! Things like “How to recover deleted photos from phone?”, “How to print Excel headers on every page?”, “How to fix a water leak at home?”. These users have a problem and want clear, followable solutions.
- Content needs: Step-by-step instructions are a must! First step, second step… with clear images/screenshots, video demos, list of tools needed, common mistakes to avoid. Just talking theory without steps is useless.
- Data support: Backlinko found that articles with step-by-step guides rank on average 30% higher in Google’s “how-to” searches.
Trying to decide what to buy? (Commercial Investigation)
- Typical behavior: Searches like “iPhone 15 vs Pixel 8 camera comparison,” “Best home 4K projector,” or “Pros and cons of XX insurance.”
- Content needs: In-depth comparisons! Side-by-side spec tables, real user experience (battery life, stability, etc.), pros & cons summary, and buyer recommendations. If you only talk about the good stuff, users will think it’s just an ad.
- Data-backed: According to Ahrefs, commercial keywords (with terms like “vs,” “review,” or “best”) are super competitive — but they attract high-intent users ready to convert.
Why your content keeps missing the mark — what’s going wrong?
Guessing user intent without looking at real search data:
- Fail point: You assume someone searching “yoga” wants tutorials (how-to), but the top 3 SERP results are “discounts for nearby yoga studios” (commercial). Writing without Googling first? You’re likely off-base.
- Data sign: Your target keyword shows up a lot in Search Console, but CTR is below 1% or impressions are high with barely any clicks. You probably misread the intent — your title/description isn’t pulling the right audience.
Your content’s a confusing mash-up with mixed intent:
- Fail point: You write about air fryers, start with the science (informational), toss in a recipe (how-to), then slap a product link at the end (commercial). It’s all over the place. Users bail when they can’t find what they need.
- Data sign: High bounce rate (>80%) and low time on page (<30 seconds). People click in, realize it’s not what they want, and leave fast.
Keyword seems relevant, but you missed the real problem behind it:
- Fail point: Someone searches “clean coffee machine,” and you go on about the machine’s design and why cleaning matters (info-focused), but barely mention the key stuff — like “which descaler to use” or “step-by-step video.” What they really need is: “What to do if my machine’s clogged with scale and not brewing?”
- Data sign: Keyword might rank OK, but conversion is terrible (no downloads, no clicks, no leads). That means you didn’t hit the user’s pain point.
Your language is too vague — or too technical — and not user-friendly:
- Fail point: You write “Achieve financial freedom by optimizing your asset allocation strategy,” when the reader just wants “How to save money earning 5K a month.” Or you’re writing skincare content using academic jargon under lifestyle keywords.
- Data sign: Compared to top-ranking content, your language and tone feel out of place. That’s why users — and Google — ignore it.
How to fix it
Step 1: Google your keyword — treat the top 10 results like the answer key
- Look for: What kind of content is ranking? (Listicles? How-tos? Comparisons? Buying guides?)
- Watch out for: Google’s “Featured Snippets” or “People Also Ask” boxes — those show what users care about most. If “how to descale a coffee machine” brings up a steps list in a Snippet, you better put your step-by-step front and center!
- Free tool: Use Search Console’s Coverage report to see what queries are actually leading to your page (even if you didn’t target them). It’s a goldmine of real intent.
Step 2: Dig deeper into the unsaid user intent
- Tool combo:
- Google’s “related searches”: Type your keyword, scroll to the bottom of the SERP, and check what else people are searching.
- AnswerThePublic: Even the free version gives you tons of real user questions (who/what/when/why/how). Great for uncovering exact user concerns.
- Reddit / Xiaohongshu / Zhihu: Browse relevant threads. If most high-voted answers under “air fryer” on Zhihu complain about how hard it is to clean — boom, you know “how to clean an air fryer” is a major how-to need.
- Pro tip: When you see a lot of queries with words like “how,” “steps,” “why,” “solution,” “which is better,” “vs,” or “recommend” — the intent type is super clear. Match those verbs to the four types of search intent.
Step 3: Match your structure and tone to the search intent type
- For informational: Get to the point — define clearly + use diagrams. Format: Open with “In simple terms, XX means…,” then break it into key points, and wrap up with links to more in-depth content. No ads! No product pushes!
- For how-to: Lead with the user’s pain (“Struggling with deleted photos?”), then jump into “Follow these 6 steps to recover them in 5 minutes.” Show the steps clearly (add screenshots!), then finish with a quick FAQ. Steps are the star!
- For commercial: Start with a comparison table! Lay out Product A vs B vs C side by side. Include real pros & cons (don’t skip cons!), real usage insights, and who each one is best for (e.g., “Beginners pick A, power users go with B”). Price and where to buy too. Don’t be afraid to point out weaknesses — sounding objective builds trust.
- For navigational/transactional: Direct links + latest info (like “Official site,” “2024 discount code”). Accuracy and freshness matter. Expired coupons = lost trust.
Ask yourself after writing
- If I search for “XXX” (target keyword), is this the kind of content I’d want to find?
- Does the title start with a clear action verb? (Like “How to…”, “…Solutions”, “…Buying Guide”)
- Does the first three screenfuls deliver the core solution/info right away? Don’t make users dig!
Poor readability and messy structure
Don’t underestimate formatting and writing style—they’re often the final straw that kills your traffic.
Imagine this: You open an article titled “Credit Card Selection Guide 2024” on your phone, and the first screen is a wall of dense text, no spacing, no bold highlights, and the key info is buried somewhere in the middle—you’d want to close it immediately, right? That’s exactly how users feel.
Even Google’s updating its algorithm: Over 60% of search traffic comes from mobile, and poor layout on a tiny screen is a disaster. Google clearly considers “page experience” (including load speed, readability, interaction) as a ranking factor.
If your content is hard to read, Google won’t recommend it.
Why does “messiness” kill your traffic instantly?
User patience = zero. 3 seconds to win them over: Users glance at a page (literally just one glance), and if they don’t get a clear signal like “What’s this about? Is it useful for me?”, they bounce immediately.
Google Analytics shows that over 50% of users exit within 10 seconds if the page doesn’t deliver. Poor structure and buried info = begging them to hit “back.”
Google can’t read it properly either: Googlebot (the crawler indexing your content) is basically a “machine reader.” It prefers well-structured pages (clear H1/H2s, short paragraphs, proper keyword placement).
Poor mobile experience: Think about how you browse content on your phone: narrow screen, constant scrolling, maybe in a noisy environment. Now imagine facing:
- “Monster” paragraphs: Anything over 4 lines can fill an entire screen or more—totally overwhelming.
- No visual focus: Everything is just gray text—no bold, no bullets, no images to guide the eye.
- Vague titles: Subheadings like “Key Principles” or “Important Steps”—but what are they? The reader has to dig through a block of text to find out.
With that kind of experience, of course users bounce. Google reports: If a mobile page fails to deliver the core info in 3 seconds, 53% of users leave instantly.
Where exactly is your content “messy”?
“No break” paragraph hell:
- Symptoms: 300 to 500 words without a single break—a wall of text.
- Impact: Huge visual strain, and the key info gets buried. Eye-tracking studies from Nielsen Norman show that users scan in an “F-pattern”—the bottom of long paragraphs gets ignored. So your “golden nuggets” down there? Might as well not exist.
- Related data: Content tools like Clearscope found that pages with paragraphs over 150 words see a 35% drop in reading completion.
“Maze-like” headings that confuse more than help:
- Symptoms:
- Too generic: “Strategy Analysis”, “Optimization Methods”.
- Too poetic: “Clouds & Currents of Investment” (no clue what this means).
- Poor hierarchy: H2 looks more important than H1.
- Impact: Users can’t scan titles to find what they need, and Googlebot can’t identify the right sections either.
- Underlying issue: Headings aren’t for decoration—they should clearly preview what the section is about. If they don’t, they’ve failed.
Wordy, tangled language:
- Symptoms:
- One sentence has 3-4 commas, parentheses, dashes, and the subject and verb are miles apart (e.g., “Given the current complex international landscape and the domestic economic trends stabilizing after Q1 volatility, we (as a long-term value-focused institution) believe…”).
- Jargon overload with no explanation (non-SEO folks seeing “SERP”, “CWV” = instant confusion).
- Too many long sentences: Tools like Hemingway App often flag 25+ word sentences in bulk.
- Impact: It raises the cognitive load—people need to re-read to get it. If they don’t understand it on the first go, they’ll give up.
- Research backs this: Studies show that when the average sentence is over 20 words, comprehension drops sharply.
No visual “signposts” to guide the reader:
- Symptoms: Missing:
- Bullet points (• / – / 1. 2. 3.): For listing key points.
- Numbered steps (“Step 1: … Step 2: …”): For how-to guides.
- Bold for key info (but only for what matters).
- Images/charts/infographics: Great for breaking down complex ideas.
- Clean tables: Makes comparison easy at a glance.
- Impact: Users are forced to painfully scan the whole page. Without visual cues, they can’t jump to the important parts—super inefficient.
The fix
The “short paragraphs + clear subheadings” golden combo:
- Guideline: On desktop: keep paragraphs under 3–4 lines (ideal 50–120 words); on mobile: max 2–3 lines!
- Guideline: On desktop: keep paragraphs under 3–4 lines (ideal 50–120 words); on mobile: max 2–3 lines!
Give each section a clear, descriptive subheading:
- Wrong: “Some thoughts”, “Key takeaways” — vague and unhelpful.
- Right: “Top 3 Mistakes When Choosing a Credit Card”, “Step-by-Step: How to Compare APR Rates” — clear and informative.
Use formatting to make content scannable:
- Bold key points — don’t overdo it, but highlight the good stuff.
- Break complex concepts into bullet lists.
- Use numbered steps for tutorials or how-to guides.
- Add charts, tables, or graphics to simplify dense info.
Write for humans, not robots:
- Tip: After writing a section, read it out loud. If you stumble, it’s too complex.
- Avoid long-winded intros, get straight to the point.
- Explain any jargon or abbreviations (e.g., don’t just say “CWV”, explain it means Core Web Vitals).
Optimize mobile reading experience:
- Preview your article on a phone before publishing — does it feel easy to read?
- Avoid giant paragraphs, long sentences, or links too close together (fat-finger nightmare!).
- Use enough white space — it reduces visual stress.
Bottom line:
- Writing great content isn’t just about what you say — it’s also how you present it.
- If it looks hard to read, users will leave. If Google can’t read it well, you won’t rank.
- Clean structure, strong headlines, and clear formatting = better experience for both users and search engines.
- Bad: “Basic principles” -> Good: “3 Key Rules for Beginners Learning Personal Finance” or “How to Avoid Common Finance Traps? (3-Step Guide)”
- Bad: “How-to guide” -> Good: “Photo Recovery Guide on Your Phone (Step-by-Step with Images)”
Embrace “lazy-friendly formatting”: bullets, bold text, and white space are your best friends:
- Scenario 1: Listing items / pros & cons → Use bullet lists (ul/li HTML structure):
- Bad: Writing like “There are many ways to deepen your content: First, explore user pain points; Second, support it with data; Third, offer actionable steps.”
- Good: List it out:
- Dive into real user questions: Use tools like AnswerThePublic.
- Add real data: Reference studies or test results (e.g., “This method boosted conversions by 22% in tests”).
- Offer clear steps: Use numbered lists to break it down 1-2-3.
- Scenario 2: Step-by-step guides → Use ordered (numbered) lists (ol/li HTML structure)!
- Visual emphasis: Only bold the most important words or short phrases (like: method names, key data, major warnings). Avoid bolding entire sentences — that defeats the point.
- Leave some breathing room: Space out your paragraphs and list items (use
tags). Wall-to-wall text makes your content feel overwhelming.
“Short sentences win.” Clean up awkward language:
- Check right after writing:
- Use active voice whenever possible (Bad: “The plan was validated by our team” → Good: “Our team validated the plan”);
- Cut useless fluff words (“very,” “extremely,” “basically,” etc.);
- See lots of “of,” “and,” or “that”? Try breaking up the sentence.
- Tool tip: Run your draft through Hemingway Editor (free online version). It highlights:
- Hard-to-read long sentences (in red/yellow): Your goal is a “middle school” or “high school” reading level — good enough for 90% of users.
- Overused adverbs (in blue).
- Passive voice (in green).
- Goal: Keep most of your text yellow/green. Eliminate all deep red!
Important! Preview for mobile users first:
- Before publishing: Check how the article looks on your phone (or use Chrome Dev Tools and switch to mobile view).
- What to check:
- Do the first 100 words (what shows up first on mobile) hit the point fast?
- Are your H2 headings clear and punchy — easy to scan on a small screen?
- Any paragraph that feels like a “black ribbon” stretched across the screen? Break it up!
- Are key buttons (like “Download Template”) easy to tap on mobile?
- Bonus tip: Google Search Console’s “Mobile Usability Report” is gold. It flags mobile-specific issues like tiny fonts or buttons too close — fixing these helps your rankings directly.
Google always favors content that clearly, directly, and simply solves real user problems.




