Based on Google search data, 72% of clicks are focused on the first 3 results, and pages with keywords naturally included in the title rank an average of 15 positions higher than those with forced keywords (Ahrefs study). But many people make two mistakes when writing titles: they either keyword-stuff it like “2024 Latest Faucet Leak Repair Steps and Methods,” or they completely avoid keywords, like “Fixing Pipes Quickly and Easily”—the former is a turn-off for users, and the latter is invisible to Google.
In fact, you just need to pay attention to three details:
- Choose the right words: Use everyday language that real users search for (for example, “what to do when a faucet keeps dripping” has 8 times the search volume of “faucet repair techniques”).
- Get the position right: When keywords are at the beginning of the title, the click-through rate is 19% higher than when they are at the end (Moz experimental data).
- Make it sound natural: Talk like you’re having a conversation and include specific numbers (e.g., “Fix a leak for 10 bucks” has a 40% higher click-through rate than “low-cost repair”).
Next, I’ll walk you through 3 specific steps and real-life title correction examples to show you how to write titles that are both search-friendly and appealing.

Table of Contens
TogglePut keywords in 3 places in the title
Google’s research shows that pages with keywords in the first 5 words of the title have an average click-through rate that’s 22% higher than those with keywords further back (Moz data). But putting keywords in the right place is just the start; the key is to make it sound natural. For example:
- “How to fix a leaky faucet? 3 simple methods” (Keyword in the front, natural)
- “DIY pipe repair: a complete guide to leaky faucets” (Keyword in the middle, clear)
- “Fix a kitchen faucet leak in 10 minutes” (Keyword at the end, complete)
Experimental data shows that titles between 50-60 characters long have the highest click-through rate (Backlinko). If it’s longer, it gets cut off on mobile search, and if it’s shorter, it might not have enough information. Now, let’s break down where keywords should go in the title and how to avoid awkward stuffing.
Keyword in the first 5 words of the title (Best position)
Why it works?
- Google’s algorithm prioritizes the words at the beginning of a title, which impacts ranking.
- Users can confirm it’s what they’re looking for at a glance, increasing the click-through rate.
Example comparison:
✅ “How to fix a leaky faucet? Get it done in 5 minutes” (Keyword in the front, clear)
❌ “2024 Latest Repair Guide: Faucet Leak Treatment Methods” (Keyword is at the end, not direct)
Data support:
- Titles with keywords in the first 5 words rank an average of 15% higher than those without (Ahrefs).
- In mobile search, the visibility of the first 30 characters determines 70% of clicks (Google study).
When to use it:
- When the user’s search intent is clear (e.g., “how to fix,” “how to solve”).
- When the keyword is short (no more than 3-4 words).
Keyword in the middle of the title (Balancing info and appeal)
Why it works?
- Great for longer keywords or when you need to add more details.
- Makes the title flow better while still being good for SEO.
Example comparison:
✅ “DIY repair: 3 ways to fix a leaky faucet” (Keyword in the middle, natural)
❌ “Faucet leak repair tips, 2024 latest version” (Keyword is at the end, info is vague)
Data support:
- Pages with keywords in the middle of the title have an average dwell time that’s 30% longer than those with keyword-stuffed titles (SEMrush).
- Users are more likely to click on titles that offer specific methods (like “3 solutions”).
When to use it:
- When the keyword is long (e.g., “what to do about a dripping kitchen faucet”).
- When you need to add practical info (like “no tools needed” or “low-cost”).
Keyword at the end of the title (Adding final info)
Why it works?
- Perfect for titles that are already catchy and you just want to reinforce the keyword at the end.
- Avoids being too wordy at the beginning and keeps it concise.
Example comparison:
✅ “Fix it for 10 bucks! Quick leaky faucet repair” (Keyword at the end, clear result)
❌ “Leaky faucet: cause analysis and repair methods” (Keyword is in the front, but not very appealing)
Data support:
- Titles with a result-oriented description (like “quick repair”) have an 18% higher conversion rate (Unbounce).
- Users are more willing to click on titles that promise a clear benefit (like “save on repair costs”).
When to use it:
- When the first part of the title is already grabbing attention (like “Fix it for 10 bucks”).
- When the keyword needs to be combined with a specific outcome (like “quick fix” or “permanent solution”).
Keyword stuffing vs. natural integration
The problem with stuffing:
- Google might see it as “keyword spam” and lower your ranking.
- It looks unnatural to users, and they won’t want to click.
Example comparison:
❌ “Faucet leak repair methods tips guide tutorial” (Stuffing, sounds unnatural)
✅ “Leaky faucet? Fix it yourself and save 200 bucks” (Natural, has appeal)
How to check if it’s natural?
- Read it out loud, does it sound like a normal conversation?
- If you take out the keyword, does the title still make sense?
- Does it offer extra value (like “save time” or “save money”)?
Use tools to optimize title length and keyword weight
I recommend using CoSchedule Headline Analyzer to check:
- Length: 50-60 characters is best (mobile-friendly).
- Keyword position: Is it in the first 5 words or a prominent spot?
- Readability: A score of 70+ is good.
Example optimization:
- Original title: “How to fix a leaky faucet” (Too short, not enough info)
- Optimized: “Leaky faucet? 3 ways to fix it in 10 minutes” (Includes keyword + specific solution)
Practical methods to make titles more appealing
According to a BuzzSumo analysis of 100 million articles, titles with specific numbers (like “3 methods”) have a 36% higher click-through rate than regular titles. In Google’s search results page (SERP), the top 3 titles contain an average of 1.2 clear benefits (like “save money,” “save time”). For example:
- “Leaky faucet? Fix it in 5 minutes and save $200” (includes numbers + result) has a 47% higher click-through rate than “Leaky faucet repair guide.”
- “Kitchen drain clogged? A single straw can fix it” (specific method) gets twice as many shares as a regular title.
Users take an average of 2.3 seconds to decide whether to click (Chartbeat data), so the title needs to give them a reason to click within the first 10 words. Here’s a breakdown of 5 proven methods to boost your click-through rate.
Add specific numbers – make info more believable
Why it works?
- Numbers convey information quickly (“5 minutes” is clearer than “quickly”).
- Users subconsciously think numbers represent “a proven method.”
Data support:
- Titles with odd numbers have a 15% higher click-through rate than even ones (Content Science data).
- Phrases like “3 methods” and “5 steps” are most commonly used because they’re easy to remember.
Example comparison:
✅ “Leaky faucet? 3 ways to fix it in 10 minutes” (Clear numbers + time)
❌ “Various methods for leaky faucet repair” (Vague)
When to use it:
- For tutorial-style content (steps, methods, tips).
- When you need to quantify the results (e.g., “save 30% on electricity”).
Emphasize the result or benefit – answer “what’s in it for me?”
Why it works?
- Users search to solve a problem, so a title that gets straight to the point is more appealing.
- Google tends to recommend titles that have a clear problem-solving intent.
Data support:
- Titles with benefits like “save money” or “no tools needed” have a 22% higher conversion rate (Unbounce).
- The negative problem + positive outcome title structure (e.g., “Leaky? Fix it this way for a permanent solution”) has the highest click-through rate.
Example comparison:
✅ “Kitchen drain clogged? A single straw can clear it in 5 seconds” (Problem + specific solution)
❌ “Causes and treatment methods for a clogged drain” (No direct benefit)
When to use it:
- For content about repairs, DIY, or saving money.
- When you need to highlight the difference from your competitors.
Use question titles – match user search habits
Why it works?
- 40% of searches start with question words (like “how” or “what”).
- Question titles are more likely to appear in Google’s Featured Snippet.
Data support:
- Titles starting with “why” get 25% more shares than declarative sentences (BuzzSumo).
- Question + solution titles (e.g., “Icy fridge? Do this to fix it instantly”) rank higher.
Example comparison:
✅ “Why is my AC dripping? One switch can fix it” (Question + solution)
❌ “Analysis of why an AC unit drips” (No solution)
When to use it:
- For explanatory or problem-solving content.
- When you want to pique a user’s curiosity.
Include time or cost – lower the barrier to action
Why it works?
- Words like “fast” and “cheap” reduce a user’s psychological burden.
- Users are more willing to click on content that seems easy to do.
Data support:
- Titles with specific costs like “5 minutes” or “10 bucks” have a 33% higher click-through rate (HubSpot).
- Phrases like “no disassembly needed” or “tool-free” can increase the save rate by 20%.
Example comparison:
✅ “Clogged toilet? 1 plastic bag can clear it in 5 minutes” (Low cost + time-saving)
❌ “A comprehensive guide to a clogged toilet” (No sense of urgency)
When to use it:
- For life hacks, emergency repairs, and similar content.
- When your target audience is a beginner who is afraid of a hassle.
Avoid over-exaggeration – maintain credibility
Common mistakes:
- Phrases like “guaranteed to work” or “100% solution” might be seen as hyperbole by Google.
- Users have low trust in exaggerated titles, leading to higher bounce rates.
How to improve:
✅ “Icy fridge? Try this trick, it works 80% of the time” (Leaves room for doubt)
❌ “Icy fridge? Fixed in one second, guaranteed” (Unrealistic)
Data support:
- Titles with softer language like “try this” or “most cases” have a 15% longer user dwell time (Medium data).
- Credible titles have a more stable ranking in search results.
Read your title out loud to make sure it sounds natural
Google research found that titles with a lower reading difficulty (6th-grade level) have a 28% higher click-through rate than complex titles (Source: Yoast). But many creators never read their titles out loud after writing them, leading to clunky, unnatural-sounding issues. For example:
- “2024 Latest Faucet Leak Repair Method Steps Guide” (17 characters, keyword-stuffed, sounds robotic)
- “Leaky faucet? I’ll show you how to fix it in 3 minutes” (12 characters, conversational, natural flow)
Experimental data shows:
- Users take an average of 0.8 seconds to decide if a title sounds natural (NNGroup eye-tracking study).
- Titles with more than 3 descriptive words (like “latest,” “comprehensive,” “practical”) have a 40% higher bounce rate.
- On mobile, when titles exceed 60 characters, the read-completion rate drops by 35%.
Be as natural as a conversation
How to do it:
After you write a title, read it out loud. Check if it meets these criteria:
- No more than 15 characters (best length for Chinese).
- No more than 3 nouns or verbs in a row.
- It sounds like how you’d normally speak.
Bad example vs. good example:
❌ “AC cooling poor performance fault cause analysis and repair tips treatment” (18 characters, noun stuffing)
✅ “AC not cooling? 3 common reasons and how to fix it” (13 characters, conversational flow)
Data support:
- Conversational titles get 62% more shares than formal ones (BuzzSumo).
- Titles with question marks get an average of 1.8 seconds more attention (Chartbeat).
Control the title length
Golden rule:
- Desktop: 50-60 characters (including spaces)
- Mobile: No more than 8 Chinese characters per line (to avoid line breaks)
Tool recommendations:
- Use the “Word Count” feature in Word to check the character count.
- Type the title into a phone note to see if it wraps to the next line.
Bad example:
“2024 Latest Comprehensive Guide to Kitchen Sink Clog Causes and DIY Repair Methods” (Looks fine on desktop, but breaks into 3 lines on mobile)
Avoid overusing modifiers
Words to limit:
- Time-related: latest / 2024 / new version (unless necessary)
- Intensity-related: comprehensive / complete / total
- Guarantee-related: guaranteed / 100% / must-read
How to optimize:
Original sentence: “5 guaranteed-to-work methods to completely fix an icy fridge problem”
Optimized: “Icy fridge? 5 methods that have been tested to work”
Data support:
- Titles with words like “latest” or “guaranteed” have 37% less user trust (Nielsen Norman Group).
- Titles with neutral language have a more stable conversion rate (Unbounce A/B testing).
Check keyword density
Reasonable range:
- The core keyword should appear 1-2 times.
- Avoid repeating synonyms (like “repair” and “fix” at the same time).
Tools to check:
- SEMrush’s SEO Writing Assistant (the free version can check keyword density).
- Simple method: Use Ctrl+F to find how many times the keyword is repeated.
Bad example:
“Washing machine leak repair methods: leak problem fixing steps tutorial” (“leak” is repeated twice, “repair/fixing” are repeated)
Guidelines for using special characters
Recommended characters:
- Question mark (?): for question-based titles.
- Vertical bar (|): for separating on desktop, avoid on mobile.
- Parentheses (): for adding extra info, but keep it to under 5 characters.
Mobile-friendly test:
Looks good on desktop: “Fridge Odor Removal | 3 Methods Compared”
Optimized for mobile: “Fridge Odor Removal: 3 Methods Compared”
Data support:
- Titles with vertical bars have a 19% lower click-through rate on mobile (Google Search Console data).
- When content inside parentheses is longer than 7 characters, the read-completion rate drops by 50%.
Synonym replacement tips
Commonly replaceable words:
- repair → fix / handle / solve
- method → trick / way / solution
- problem → situation / issue
Example application:
Original sentence: “5 repair methods for a slow phone charging problem”
Optimized: “Phone charging slow? 5 solutions”
Multi-device preview test
What to check:
- How it looks on Google search results on a desktop (max 60 characters displayed).
- How it looks on mobile search results (max 30-40 characters displayed).
- Where it gets cut off when shared on social media.
Tool recommendations:
- Use Google Search Console’s “Performance Report” to see the actual displayed length.
- Use metatags.io to preview how it looks on different platforms.
Remember: A good title = users get it at a glance + Google can recommend it + it sounds natural when you read it out loud. Now, go ahead and try this method with your own article titles.




